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family pictures 1 Year, 9 Months ago Karma: 0  
Hey everybody, this is a session i did about a month ago and wanted to see what you think. their all siblings and i wanted to do something that wasnt your typical family shot.
 
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Re:family pictures 1 Year, 9 Months ago Karma: 9  
I think you did a great job with this one. I like that they are all wearing basically the same thing. The only thing that feels a little awkward is the girl on the right side. I think if you had moved the boy at the top over to the right a little bit it would not feel like there was so much space between that one girl and the rest of the family. She almost feels lonely, like no one wants to sit next to her.
 
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Re:family pictures 1 Year, 9 Months ago Karma: 17  
Hey Eli,

I'd have to agree with Casey on both points. You did a very nice job wit this one, the only thing I would add is a mention regarding the posing (hand and arm position) of the young man in the center. You generally want to stay away from tangling arms between legs. If his right forearm was placed on this thigh and his left forearm or wrist was placed on this knee I thing it would have helped the pose a bit. Otherwise nicely done!
 
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Re:family pictures 1 Year, 2 Months ago Karma: 0  
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Re:family pictures 1 Year, 2 Months ago Karma: 0  
When the wolf Wow gold finally found the hole Buy Wow Gold in the chimney he Cheap Wow Gold crawled down and KERSPLASH right into that kettle of water cheaspest wow gold and that was the end of his troubles with the big bad wolf.
Wellcome to the game4power world to win aion gold, andbuy cheap wow gold for peace-fight. Come on,join us together!

The next day the wow gold cheap, little pig invited his mother over. She said"You see it is just as buy wow gold I told you. The best way tobuy Wow Gold get along in the world is to do things as well as you can." Fortunately the little pig hunt for wow gold where the world of warcraft gold,he also desire for the Cheapest wow Gold and learned that lesson.Nowdays he just has lived happy every moment he was very calm in danger ever after! He always shout for competitors wow gold,a piece of cake! aion kina, wow gold cheap!
 
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Re:family pictures 6 Months, 2 Weeks ago Karma: 0  
I like the ambiance you created with the hues in this picture and even the vignette around the edges. I would like to suggest that you not only incorporate the suggestions from Ed and Casey about composition but that you might want to move all of the subjects closer and fill the frame with them more. I say that even though I'm guessing that the location or setting of the image is important to you. I think you could still accomplish that even though bringing your subjects closer together. Keep up the good work. Overall I like it.
 
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